tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2116402912843812629.post8848155480461520527..comments2023-10-15T05:37:56.411-05:00Comments on Cookin' Up Success in Third Grade: Marco Polo's TravelsBecky Whttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02426078775320206443noreply@blogger.comBlogger47125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2116402912843812629.post-27495857543406033882015-09-23T12:12:04.932-05:002015-09-23T12:12:04.932-05:00I forgot my name. BenHazelwoodI forgot my name. BenHazelwoodAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2116402912843812629.post-97330466219713842015-09-23T12:11:06.034-05:002015-09-23T12:11:06.034-05:00I think Marco's travels were inportint because...I think Marco's travels were inportint because he helped his dad and uncel who's names are Niccolo' and Maffeo.Plus he fought war that I think is world war 1. He also helped the Khan with his travels and items.And he told storys about his travels.Plus he said he has not told have of what he saw.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2116402912843812629.post-27286684143569175162015-09-17T19:40:35.465-05:002015-09-17T19:40:35.465-05:00Keara,
Did you get to finish this thought? I am n...Keara,<br />Did you get to finish this thought? I am not following it completely so I am wondering if you ran out of time....Becky Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02426078775320206443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2116402912843812629.post-46619718693906706472015-09-17T19:39:30.007-05:002015-09-17T19:39:30.007-05:00Abigail,
Thank you for commenting even though you...Abigail, <br />Thank you for commenting even though your finger was hurting you so badly! I like your answer and how you brought out the culture aspect of things. However, how did the items like gunpower, paper, and silk help make the lives in Europe easier? Be sure you answer the question in the prompt!Becky Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02426078775320206443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2116402912843812629.post-71121659600960072152015-09-17T19:37:24.749-05:002015-09-17T19:37:24.749-05:00You amaze me! Every time you write, I am again bl...You amaze me! Every time you write, I am again blown away! Fantastic addition to your first comment! I can't wait to see what you do next!Becky Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02426078775320206443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2116402912843812629.post-37068731314806536222015-09-17T19:36:28.143-05:002015-09-17T19:36:28.143-05:00Very nice, Kyson! Thank you for adding why these ...Very nice, Kyson! Thank you for adding why these items would have been important!Becky Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02426078775320206443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2116402912843812629.post-17969582455110125502015-09-17T19:35:53.330-05:002015-09-17T19:35:53.330-05:00I love what you added! Thank you, Dhanin!!! You a...I love what you added! Thank you, Dhanin!!! You are doing an awesome job!Becky Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02426078775320206443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2116402912843812629.post-24338010495068149012015-09-17T11:59:48.670-05:002015-09-17T11:59:48.670-05:00I think Marco's travels were important because...I think Marco's travels were important because all those items were items that China and Europe.<br />By KearaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2116402912843812629.post-42604103276907904932015-09-17T10:12:06.624-05:002015-09-17T10:12:06.624-05:00I think there travels are importint because they a...I think there travels are importint because they are teaching about there colcher. By AbigailAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2116402912843812629.post-79052986655320749082015-09-17T10:11:19.351-05:002015-09-17T10:11:19.351-05:00I think that the polo brothers travls are inportan...I think that the polo brothers travls are inportant besuse they got gunpowder for the guns and the canons Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2116402912843812629.post-53571483684223154822015-09-17T10:09:45.361-05:002015-09-17T10:09:45.361-05:00Paper is very important to the world because peopl...Paper is very important to the world because people need paper to write. Printing is also very important to the world because if people didn't have printing we couldn't have papers for each student in school. These items are very important to the world. In my opinion, I think that the world just wouldn't be right if we didn't have these items. - Kendyl H.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2116402912843812629.post-12476687360623324632015-09-17T10:06:27.539-05:002015-09-17T10:06:27.539-05:00I think they get paper by cutting down trees. they...I think they get paper by cutting down trees. they wiil get gunpowder from mines . They wiil need gunpowder for guns and cannons. By Dhanin.P<br /><br /><br /> Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2116402912843812629.post-11112552825538121472015-09-16T16:34:13.622-05:002015-09-16T16:34:13.622-05:00Jacob,
Thank you for commenting. I do not unders...Jacob, <br />Thank you for commenting. I do not understand what you are trying to say though. Get a friend to help you spell when you are back at this center.Becky Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02426078775320206443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2116402912843812629.post-19625987115677591562015-09-16T16:33:18.760-05:002015-09-16T16:33:18.760-05:00Ooohhh, Brooks! I liked that! Now tell me how the...Ooohhh, Brooks! I liked that! Now tell me how they are so important. How did some of those items make a difference and change the world. I do like how you brought up the fact of what would have happened if Marco hadn't traveled and shared his findings.Becky Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02426078775320206443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2116402912843812629.post-82860937700055976742015-09-16T16:30:42.242-05:002015-09-16T16:30:42.242-05:00LIly S., here are 2 stars ** for you:
* - You capi...LIly S., here are 2 stars ** for you:<br />* - You capitalized correctly. * - You wrote in a complete sentence.<br /><br />My wish for you is to explain - tell me why!!!! How were these items important to Europe. Also, Marco did not bring them TO China. China had them and he brought them from China to Europe.Becky Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02426078775320206443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2116402912843812629.post-68930344989017076862015-09-16T16:28:07.343-05:002015-09-16T16:28:07.343-05:00Thank you, Keara. 2 stars * for you:
* - You used ...Thank you, Keara. 2 stars * for you:<br />* - You used correct capitalization.<br />* - You wrote in a complete sentence.<br /><br />My wish is for you not to use the word "stuff." You need to type like I have no idea what you are talking about! Be very specific. Also, these items were found IN China and India. He took these items from China to Europe.Becky Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02426078775320206443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2116402912843812629.post-43895262694186044962015-09-16T16:25:22.259-05:002015-09-16T16:25:22.259-05:00The question is "Based on the items listed ab...The question is "Based on the items listed above that Marco was introduced to, <br />do you think Marco Polo's travels were important to the world?<br />Why? Give reasons and evidence to support your answer." So, how was Marco introducing paper to the world important? How was his introducing gunpowder to the world important? That is what you are suppose to be answering.Becky Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02426078775320206443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2116402912843812629.post-16769087631696774532015-09-16T16:23:19.385-05:002015-09-16T16:23:19.385-05:00That is much better! The only change I would make...That is much better! The only change I would make right now is taking out "that's what I think." You don't have to say that at all. They know that this is your opinion and an opinion is what you think. Fantastic job!Becky Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02426078775320206443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2116402912843812629.post-89946883222197089692015-09-16T16:22:01.857-05:002015-09-16T16:22:01.857-05:00Ok... Here is an example of what I want from you.
...Ok... Here is an example of what I want from you.<br /> Marco's travels were important to the world. He was able to bring items only found<br /> in the Far East to Europe. One item he brought was paper. His bringing paper <br /> gave the people in Europe the chance to write stories down as well as to begin <br /> writing about major events. This allowed another form of communication to <br /> develop.<br />Now, you choose 1-2 different items and tell how they made life easier in Europe. You can do this!Becky Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02426078775320206443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2116402912843812629.post-25377273993723956332015-09-16T16:18:06.517-05:002015-09-16T16:18:06.517-05:00Thank you for answering the prompt! Tell me WHY we...Thank you for answering the prompt! Tell me WHY were these items important. Choose 2-3 and tell me how these items would have helped the people in Europe. You are getting there! I love how you used capital letters correctly! Keep that going! The comma after "yes" is great as well! Becky Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02426078775320206443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2116402912843812629.post-13175536841059016172015-09-16T11:46:23.641-05:002015-09-16T11:46:23.641-05:00If Marco did not travly thay would not have pary. ...If Marco did not travly thay would not have pary. jacobAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2116402912843812629.post-29595473800818037992015-09-16T11:45:06.157-05:002015-09-16T11:45:06.157-05:00If Marco didn't travel not a lot of people wou...If Marco didn't travel not a lot of people would be useing paper,gunpowder,coal,paper money,silk, and printing.these idams would be vary rare. Brooks J.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2116402912843812629.post-86991803873455103402015-09-16T11:42:13.118-05:002015-09-16T11:42:13.118-05:00To let other people tell them about there cultcher...To let other people tell them about there cultcher. by Hayden Hopkins, I answer my qushtion from you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2116402912843812629.post-66137180171712139102015-09-16T11:42:07.230-05:002015-09-16T11:42:07.230-05:00Marco's travels were important because China w...Marco's travels were important because China would be different right now.Lily S.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2116402912843812629.post-1745627110826019982015-09-16T11:28:39.692-05:002015-09-16T11:28:39.692-05:00If Marco did not bring coal to China or India they... If Marco did not bring coal to China or India they would not have warm fire like we do or be able to cook food.So if Marco didin't bring any of those things the world would not be the best it could be.I think that was a very important thing Marco did thats what I think.So thats what I think.Brayden CaudleAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com