Our picture of the week has quadrupled!
I am giving you 4 pictures of the week this week.
We are learning how to write opinions and we are going to apply that to our
picture of the week this week.
Look at the following photographs that show each of the 4 seasons.
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| Fall |
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| Spring |
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| Summer |
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| Winter |
STUDENTS: Which season of the year is your favorite?
I want you to give reasons and evidence to support your opinion.
I expect you to write more than one sentence.
In my comments though, I will just be focusing on your opinion since that is what we are
focusing on this week in English.
** Be sure to write your name at the end of your comment.
Summer is my favert sesen is smmer.Summer you get a long vacatoin from school.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your post! I like how you wrote more than your opinion. I know you wrote this before we had our lesson about opinion writing, so I would love for you to take what we talked about and apply that to your opinion sentence now. You've got this!
DeleteWrite more next time Raiden.
Deletesummer is my favorite season.Summer you get a long vacation from school.winter is also my favorite season because you get presset
DeleteNice job. Please work on it a little more. Kendyl
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ReplyDeleteI don't have a favorite season of the year but I will tell you things that I like about the 4 seasons. Fall: The thing that I like most about fall is that you never know what the weather will be. Sometimes it changes through out the day and sometimes it stays one way all day. I don't jump into piles of leaves in the fall or any time of year. Another thing about fall is that my birthday is in fall. - Kendyl
ReplyDeleteGreat facts about fall, Kendyl. I don't have a favorite season either. There is something about them all that I love. Yet, for the sake of this assignment, can you choose one season for me, please? I need us to work on writing opinions, so just make something up if you can't decide which is your favorite!
DeleteMy favorite season is Winter.I like Winter because you get to play in the snow and i get to throw snow balls at my sister i Seth Dean
ReplyDeleteGreat beginning, Seth! I love how you got started with your thoughts after your opinion. I know you wrote this before we had our lesson on writing opinions, so can you rewrite your opinion using what we talked about in our lesson! I have no doubt you can do this!
DeleteHay seth I like witer to
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DeleteI like winter because we get to get out of shcool and we get snow days. we can have snow ball fight. we can have CHRISTMAS KYSON Taylor
ReplyDeleteExcellent job, Kyson! You are doing a wonderful job! Now, take what we learned in our lesson on how to write an opinion and rewrite your opinion sentence for me. I am convinced it will be wonderful!
Deletewinter is the best seson. I like winter beuase we get out of school and we get snow days. we can have snow ball fights.we can have christmas kyson taylor
DeleteGreat job correcting your opinion, Kyson! Thank you for doing that! I want us to work on capitalization next time! Try not to use "I" at all in your paragraph.
DeleteWinter is favorite because that is Cerismos time. And we get to sled down the hills in the yard. We even get to have snow boll fite. By Abigail
ReplyDeleteAbigail, you were so close in your opinion! I like how you wrote more than your opinion. Please take what we learned in our lesson on writing opinions and apply it to your opinion here. Rewrite it in the comments below and then continue with your thoughts! I can't wait to see what you do!
DeleteMy favrot season is winter becus you can play with famly. Isaac
ReplyDeleteThank you for getting a sentence on here! Now, I want you to take what we learned in our opinion writing lesson and apply it to your sentence here. Please rewrite it in a reply below and keep going with your thoughts. I want to see at least 3 sentences.
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DeleteSummer is awesome. It is awesome because my birthday is in summer. Summer is the best season because you can get in a swimming pool. You don't have to go to school. You could watch tv all day. Those are all the resens why summer is awesome.La'Tariyahna
ReplyDeleteFantastic job, La'Tariyahna! You did a wonderful job with the whole thing. The next skill I want you to work on is not using "you" so much. Other than that, FANTASTIC!
DeleteFall is the best season. In fall the weather cools down .You get to make leave piles . Plus the World Series starts. By: Brooks J .
ReplyDeleteExcellent opinion! I love your reasons as well! You are on the right track!
DeleteMy favorite season is fall caous you get to jump in leaves and it is cool.Jacob
ReplyDeleteAlmost, Jacob! I want you to rewrite this without using "My" and "because." I know you wrote this before we talked about it. Now use what we have learned.
DeleteMy favorite season is fall.I like fall because you get to jump in leaves and clime trees. Thats way I like fall.BenHazelwood
ReplyDeleteYou almost have it, Ben. Please rewrite this without using "my" and "I" so much. They know it is your opinion because you are writing it.
DeleteSummer is the best season of the year. It is the best season because I get to go swimming and some of my friends get play with me. Swimming in the summer you can cool down and have fun and chill out. In summer I get to hang out with my friends when I go over to my Nana and Pawpaws. I get to play wit Sofie, Kaden, Josh, Madellen, and my brothers and my family. That is why I like summer.
ReplyDeleteAmazing opinion sentence! I wish I knew who you were! We need to work on not using "I" so much during the paragraph, but we will get there as well. Thank you for a wonderful opinion.
DeleteWinter is the best season of the year.I like winter best because it is my birthday in winter and I can throw snowballs at my parents.I can also make snow angels and I can make a snowman.In the picture the snow on the ground and the tree are very pretty.I can also through a sleepover.
ReplyDeleteBy Keara
LOVE your opinion! Thank you!
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ReplyDeleteWenter is my favorit season.Wenter has fun snow with snow cream.It is good to eat.Wenter is a fun season.Drink hot chocalate.Wenter is my favorit season.
ReplyDeleteBy Aaron
Aaron,
DeleteGreat ideas! Your opinion sentence is almost there! Try not to use the word "my." I love your reasons for loving winter.
Fall is my favorite season. Fall is when you jump in leaves.
ReplyDeleteby Kalvin
Kalvin,
DeleteYou are almost there with your opinion sentence. Please try to not use the word "my." Other than that, you are almost there!
Winter is my favorite season.It snow and because we get to make snowman.We get play snowball fight we get to go to my famillyes house we get to go down the driveway. When we get done we go inside drink hot choclite and to. When we get done and then we all go home.
ReplyDeleteI forgot my name Hayden.h
ReplyDeleteHayden, I really like your ideas! I love winter for many of the same reasons. You do need to write your opinion without the word "my." Then, you will be about there!
DeleteMy favorite season is Summer. I like summer because it is when you get to swim in your pool. It's also fun to go on vacation with your family. It's fun because you get to enjoy time with your family. I like to get a long break from school. That is why my favorite season is Summer.Dean
ReplyDeleteGreat ideas, Dean. We need to work on not using the word "I" in the paragraph. We will get there! Also, we don't capitalize the seasons of the year.
DeleteWinter is my favorite season.My three reasons are theirs snow.You can have snowball fights.You can make snowmen.Thats why my favorite season is Winter.Brayden
ReplyDeleteLOVE your reasons for liking winter. We need to focus on not using "my" in the sentences. Other than that, great job!
DeleteMy favorite Season is Winter.The snow is beautiful in Winter.I like playing in the snow.I like being in the fire inside my house.Lily S.
ReplyDeleteLily S.,
DeleteThank you for your answer. We need to not use "I" and "my" when we write. I love a fire as well!
Winter is great. Winter is my favorite because it is in chirstmas. Also i love winter because it is my birthday in the winter time.Winter is a lot of favorites by a lots of people because it snow a lot in the winter and it is about the only season that it snow in.Winter is about the most season enjoyed by people.Winter is great because it has the most holidays . Also it has chirstmas in it and january is a lot of people birthdays. BY ; dakedra nichole traylor
ReplyDeleteI love this! Wonderful opinion sentence! Fantastic reasons! I am so proud of you!
DeleteMy favorite season is winter. The reason why my favorite season is winter cause my birthday is in winter. When it's winter it is cold outside. In winter snow falls down. Winter is beautiful by the snow sparkling.
ReplyDeleteBy Kaylee
Kaylee,
DeleteGreat thoughts! Try not to use "my" when you write. You have such wonderful thoughts and ideas!
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ReplyDeleteSpring is fun. Spring is a good season to play and to smell the flowers. journee.
ReplyDeleteWonderful opinion!! I am so proud of you!
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ReplyDeletefall has leafs foling out of the trees. Spring is win there is flours growing every were. Summer is hot. Winter is cold andsnowing. Hannah
ReplyDeleteThank you, Hannah. You did not answer the prompt though. Please go back and answer it.
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