September 14, 2015

PIcture of the Week: September 14, 2015

STUDENTS:  This picture makes me think of many things.

1.  Harry Potter had to pull a dragon out of a bag in one of the books. 
He had to steal an egg from the dragon.
2.  We use to sing a song about bringing home a baby bumblee 
and how our mom would be proud of us.  However, the bee wound up stinging.

We are going to follow that line of thought. 
Study the picture.



PROMPT:
Imagine you have caught this dragon.
You want to keep it as a pet.
Why would you want a dragon as a pet?

**Remember to put your name at the end of your comment.

62 comments:

  1. It would be cool to have a pet dragon that could breeth ice and lava and could fly up side doun.
    Landyn

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    1. Great ideas, Landyn! Why would you need it to breathe ice and lava? Why would you want it to fly upside down? Tell me more!

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    2. Then I could make ice creem with out paying.If the dragon breeths lava it will bern doen a tree. Landyn

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    3. Thank you, Landyn. Next week I would love to see you elaborate as much as you can the first time! You have such wonderful ideas! Thank you for sharing and correcting them!

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  2. It would be cool to have a dragon so it can breeth fire and ice.It could fiy faster then a jet.Thats why I think that a dragon is cool.Raiden

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    1. Raiden,
      Great job! I want you to elaborate - tell me more. Why do you want it to breathe fire and ice. Why do you want it to fly faster than a jet?

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    2. Then it can make ice crem more cold.I cold cook things.It could hurt the bad guys fast.

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    3. I forgot to put my name.Raiden

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    4. Raiden,
      Thank you for going back and telling me more about why you want a dragon for a pet. I would love to see you elaborate on the topic the first time next week. You have wonderful ideas! I love seeing and hearing your thoughts!

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  3. I would want a pet dragon because it could grab stuff and fly it to me and make grilled cheese golden.
    By Seth Dean

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    1. Seth,
      I love your creativity! Just amazing! Now, I want you to tell me more. Why would you need it to grab things for you? Why would you want it to fly to you? Why would you want it to make you a grilled cheese and could it make one for me?

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    2. I would want a pet dragon because it could grab stuff and fly it to me if my legs were broken and it would make grilled cheese because it is a nice dragon oh and yes it can make a grilled cheese berger.

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    3. I forgot to put my name. Seth Dean

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    4. Thank you, Seth! I loved reading your different ideas about having a dragon as a pet. Thank you for sharing and elaborating! Try to do more elaborating the first time you write next week. You are doing wonderful work!

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    5. I would want it because it can sneak in my sister's room and grab something she took from my room and bring it to me and breathe fire at her feet and scare her and it would make me
      laugh.

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  4. I think that a dragon would not be a good pet. if it was one of the types that breathe fire i would not want to be around It. If i had a dragon as a pet it would probably fly around the house. I do think it would be a good pet to play with me. It maybe would breathe fire on me. I think there are bunches of ideas why it would be a good pet. there are also allot of ideas why it would not be a good pet. by drec

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    1. Derec,
      This is what I have been wanting from you!!! Thank you! Now, I need you to capitalize correctly! Keep up the great job and add what we have learned about capitalization!!

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    2. I think that a dragon would not be a good pet. If it was one of the types that breathe fire I would not want to be around it. If i had a dragon as a pet it would probably fly around the house. derec

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    3. YAY!!!!!! Great job capitalizing! You have shown you can do it! Try to do more of that the first time you write. I know you won't get everything, but try to get the basics - first words of sentences, your name, etc.

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  5. I would want a pet dragon because it can fly and it can give me stuff that I want and also why I want it as a pet because it can fly me home so I will not have to ride the bus. by journee

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    1. Journee,
      Great ideas! I love your reasons! I would love for you to take this great big run on sentence and turn it into about 4 sentences. You are rockin' girl!!

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    2. I think whyIwould not want a pet dragon because it will breeth fire on me by journee

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    3. Journee,
      I really like this idea you have given me. However, you did not have to write a whole new sentence. Look back at your first comment.. You have one giant run-on sentence. Take that and make it into 4 smaller sentences. You can do it!

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  6. I would love for the dragon to be my pet because its cute, and when he growes he will protect me.
    by keara

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    1. Thank you, Keara. Great ideas, but I need you to tell me more. What makes it cute? How will it protect you? Elaborate, girl! I want to know all about you and what is in that head of yours!

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    2. I would sometimes want a dragon as a pet.1.The dragon could protect me from strangers.
      2. the dragon could try to hurt me

      BY Kaylee

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    3. Great ideas Kaylee! I like how you gave reasons. You don't have to number them! Can you tell me HOW the dragon could protect you to prove you would want it for a pet? Then explain HOW the dragon could hurt you to prove why you would not want it for a pet? Keep up the fantastic work!

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    4. The dragon could protect me by roaring if there's stranger danger.

      The dragon could hurt me because the dragon could get mad and eat me.

      BY Kaylee

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    5. Good job! Let's do all of this the first time next week! Thank you!

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  7. I want a dragon because it could help me.It could smell a way out
    By Aaron Taylor

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    1. Great start, Aaron! Tell me more about how he could help you out (where would you be?). Give me another reason as to why you would want a dragon. Great beginning! Keep on keeping on!

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  8. It can warm the food up faster.It can fly. by Kalvin

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    1. Kalvin,
      What wonderful reasons you gave! Where's your opinion though? Do you or do you not want a dragon for a pet? That needs to be your very first sentence. Tell how it would warm up the food. Tell how it would help you if your dragon flew.

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  9. I would like to have a pet dragon because it would be a good protecion pet and help save me. i would like it and when my brothers messes with me it will be able to bite them or i would like to have a pet dragon because it will grow up to be beautiful and grow up fully trained.these are some reasons i like it and it can clean my room up for me and cook food and protect me from discusting bugs bye eating them. these are serval reasons i would lik to have a pet dragon and it would be beatuiful and thtas my reason why i would like to have a pet draon as a pet. dakedra traylor

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    1. Ummmm... WOW!!!! What a wonderful job you did! Guess what I am going to ask you to do? Correct your run-on sentences! So many good ideas and thoughts are in this paragraph. Get them under control now! Also don't forget to capitalize!!!! Proud of you!

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    1. I think a dragon would be a great pet b/c it would be pretty dragon . From Ryan

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    2. Ryan,
      Thank you for writing a sentence! I need you to tell me more though. What about the dragon being pretty would make it a good pet? Describe the dragon to me. Tell me more! Stay focused.

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  11. I would like a pet dragen that could spray fire and lave.that could fly. Noe

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    1. Noe,
      I love that you capitalized your name and the first word of the sentence. Tell me more about why you would like a dragon that can spray fire and lava. How would that help you? The part of your comment that says, "that could fly" is not a complete sentence. We are missing a subject. Can you add a subject to it so I understand what could fly? I am so glad you got on and answered!

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  12. Yes,I would like a pet dragon because it would help me get out of a fire!!!!!!!!!!! from Ben Hazelwood

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    1. Great idea, Ben! I like it because it is different. Tell me though... HOW would the dragon help you get out of the fire. ELABORATE - tell me more! You have wonderful thoughts! I want to see them on here!

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  13. Yes, I would like a dragon because if I ever went camping it would roast marshmelos.Lily

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    1. I love that idea, Lily! Tell me more though! Don't stop with one sentence! Keep going!

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  14. I like the dragon because it is so tiny.And it is cool that it can breath fire. kenley

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    1. Very nice thoughts, Kenley! I love how you wrote in complete sentences with capital letters and end marks at the end! I would love for you to capitalize your name next time and don't start a sentence with "and."

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  15. I would like a pet dragon that had fire breath and ice breath. If I had a pet dragon I fed it evry Daniel.

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    1. Good job, Daniel! You were on your way to great thoughts I can tell! I love how you used complete sentences and capital letters at the beginning of your sentences! Keep up the great work!

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  16. A dragon is a good pet because it can bake a cake and copcake. It can spray.Makaila

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    1. Makaila,
      YAY! I love when you comment! You had 2 great thoughts in complete sentences! That is fantastic! I also love how you used capital letters correctly! I am so proud of you!

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  17. I would want a pet dragon because dragons can breath fire and lay eggs.La'Tariyahna

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    1. That is a great thought, La'Tariyahna. Tell me more though. HOW would those things help you? Why would you want a dragon to do those things. You can tell me more!

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    2. The eggs would help me by making scrambled eggs.The fire would cook the eggs.La'Tariyahna

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  18. the reason i would like to keep the dragon is because i would like to ride it and it will protect me. i would also like to keep it because it could cook your food for you quick. i would also like to keep it because it would keep me safe. LILLY ALLEN

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    1. WOW!!! You just get better and better each time! Thank you for elaborating as much as you did today! That is awesome! Next time, I want you to work on capitalizing correctly. You don't have anything capitalized in your paragraph, and then your whole name is capitalized. You only need the first letters of your name capitalized. Keep up the great writing! You have a true gift!

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  20. I would love to have a pet dragon because its face is so cute,and it could protect me by using his mouth and claws and using its tail.
    By Keara

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    1. Thank you for adding this description! Next time you can add it under reply instead of starting a new comment!. However, fantastic job! I am loving your writing!

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  21. I woud lick to have a pet dragon beacose if it had fire breath I could roste a marsh melo,hot dog,cacktis or berger.Aiden josif walker

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  22. Iwould like a pet dragon becuase it will breath fire to crimminals . I want it to breath under water.
    My brother would like a pet dragon because it will breath ice for cimminals. I would like a pet dragon.
    By Dhanin .P

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  23. I would want a pet dragon because then my dog won't be lonly. And my mommy will not have to cook.He will be a good hunting portner for my daddy.By Abigail

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  24. The mouse is hiding in the cup because the cat mite eat the mouse. Kenley

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