STUDENTS: Each week, I am going to place a photograph or picture on the blog.
I want you to use this time to look at the photograph,
and then answer the prompt underneath.
PROMPT:
Finish this sentence.
Sometimes, I just like to lay on my lily pad
and think about ___________.
Sometimes, I just like to lay on my lily pad and think about my life. I also like to think about what I will do when I grow up, how I can do better in school, and I like to think about my family and friends and how I can help others. Sometimes when I lay down I don't think, I just read. I do many other things too. I do these things because that's who I am. By - Kendyl N Huff
ReplyDeleteKendyl,
DeleteYou continue to blow me away with your writing! I can't wait to see where you go with all of it this year! This is absolutely fabulous! Content was spot on! Keep up the great work!
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ReplyDeletesometimes i lie on my lily pad and think about my life
DeleteThank you for writing on the blog. However, I need you to add your name to the comment. I also need you to capitalize the first word in the sentence and the letter I. I also need you to put an end mark at the end of the sentence.
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ReplyDeletesometimes I think about the futer. sometimes i think about school and how to be a better person. Aiden W.
ReplyDeleteAiden,
DeleteThank you for working hard on the blog today. I would love to see you write the prompt as well. Also, please remember to capitalize the letter I. What about school do you think about? What do you want to do to be a better person?
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ReplyDeletesome times I just lay on my lily pad and think about what life is about when you have the worst day ever. LILLY ALLEN
ReplyDeleteLilly A.,
DeleteOH NO! Don't think about negative things! What could you think about that is positive? Don't forget to capitalize the first letter of a sentence!
sometimes,i like to lay on a lilypad and think aboutthe futer. byBen
ReplyDeleteBen,
DeleteI need you to really focus on using capital letters correctly when you type. What do you think the future will hold for you?
Sometimes, I just like to lay on my lily pad and think about being creative and thinking about building a new thing.La'Tariyahna
ReplyDeleteLa'Tariyahna,
DeleteI love being creative as well. What things do you want to build? Don't put a comma after sometimes. Great sentence! Keep up the good work.
I like to build houses with Lego blocks La'Tariyahna
DeleteI am so glad to know this about you! Thank you for elaborating! Be sure to use those end marks!
DeleteSometimes I just lay on my lily pad and think about what just hapened . I think about my life experences. Brooks J.
ReplyDeleteBrooks,
DeleteGreat ideas! What kind of "life experiences" have you had?
sometimes i like to lay on my lilypad and think aboutthe the futer . by Jacob Miller
ReplyDeleteJacob,
DeleteThank you for getting on and writing. I thought your sentence was very well put together. Remember to capitalize the beginnings of sentences. What do you think your future will hold?
Sometimes, I just like to lay on my lily pad and think about me eating a big boll of fly's. Lily
ReplyDeleteLily,
DeleteI love how you did this from the view point of the frog! You were the only one who did that! How creative that is! Don't put a comma after sometimes. What else do you think the frog would be thinking?
sometimes i lay on my lilypad and think about the moon
ReplyDeleteThank you for writing on the blog. Next time I need you to put your name at the end of the comment. I also need you to capitalize the beginning of the sentence and the letter I. Also, remember to put an end mark at the end of the sentence. Thank you!
Deleteeating a fly.
ReplyDeleteThank you for writing on the blog. However, I need to know who you are! Please add your name at the end of the comment. I would also love for you to write in a complete sentence next time. You are missing a subject of your sentence.
Deletesometimes i like to lay on my lilypad and think about my life. I like to think about my video games.
ReplyDeleteWhat a great comment! I wish you had told me your name at the end of the comment though. I love how you capitalized the last sentence. Please do that with all of your sentences next time. Thank you!
DeleteI just like to lay on my lily pad and think about me eating a hole bunch of flys by journee bass.
ReplyDeleteJournee,
DeleteThank you so much for writing on the blog! Thank you for putting your name at the end as well. You had a wonderful sentence! All I ask right now is that you put an end mark at the end of your sentence. You are doing a wonderful job this year!
I just like to lay on my lily pad and think about how lucky I am to be the principal of the best school in the whole world with the best kids and the best teachers!!!!
ReplyDeleteMrs. Kim,
DeleteThank you for visiting the blog and leaving a comment! We are so lucky to have you as our principal! Please come back to visit any time!
I wouid just lay on my lily pad and look at the bugs and the fiys then eat them and have a great night.Jakiyah.
ReplyDeleteJakiyah,
DeleteGirl, I am super proud of you and how hard you are working! I love the sentence you wrote today! I want you to go back and reread the sentence next time before you publish because you wrote a run-on sentence. How could you make that one sentence into 2-3 sentences? Keep up the fantastic work!
sometimes i just like to lay on my lily pad and think about school. hannah
ReplyDeleteGreat sentence, Hannah! I am so proud of you! What do you think about in regards to school? Please be sure, next time, to capitalize the first word of a sentence as well as the letter I.
Deletesometimes i like to lay on my lily pad and think about the future. kenley
ReplyDeleteWonderful sentence! I am so proud of you, Kenley! What do you think will happen in the future? I want to see you capitalize correctly next time! Other than that, great job!
DeleteSmoetimes i just like to lay on my lily pad and think about the future addison
ReplyDeleteAddison,
DeleteThank you for capitalizing the first word of your sentence. It is a great sentence. Please be sure to put an end mark at the end! Thank you for commenting!
sumtims i lea on my lile pad and think aubt the future samantha
ReplyDeleteSamantha,
DeleteThis is a great thought! I want to see you capitalize correctly next time. Thank you for commenting.
Sometimes I lay on my lily pad and think about what is going to happen the next day.dean
ReplyDeleteDean,
DeleteI do the same thing! I want to see you ELABORATE with your writing! Also, please capitalize your name! You have a lot to share! Please share it!
Sometimes, I like to lay on my lily pad and think about what's happening in the world. I also think about how I can make a difference when I grow up. I think about hanging with my friends as well. Makaila
ReplyDeleteMakaila,
DeleteWhat wonderful thoughts! I love your heart! You are such a sweet child! Thank you for commenting!
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ReplyDeleteSometimes I just like to lay on my lily pad and think about how school is going to be and my life.
ReplyDeleteSometimes I just like to lay on my lily pad and think about how school is going to be and my life.
DeleteKaylee
Kaylee,
DeleteThank you for seeing you needed to add your name! Way to be proactive and get that taken care of! What do you think school will be like? What do you think your life will be like? I want to know more about you, sweet girl!
Sometimes, I like to lay on my lily pad and think about my life and think about how my frinends are doing.Brayden
ReplyDeleteThank you, Brayden! You are always so thoughtful of others! I would love to know more about this though. Be sure to elaborate!!
DeleteSomtimes I like to lay on my lily pad and think about what i will be when im grown ben
ReplyDeleteBen,
DeleteThank you for coming back to the blog to comment. I would love to see you reply to your previous comment. I also need you to use the feedback I have given you and apply it. Please start capitalizing correctly as well as using end marks! Slow down and take your time!
Sometimes I just like to lay on my lily pad and think about the world and the future.
ReplyDeleteby keara
Keara,
DeleteThank you for commenting. I would love to know what you think about the world and the future! Tell me more, girl! Also, don't forget to capitalize your name!
Sometimes I just like to lay on my lily pad and think about whats going to hapen to the world because new stuff could be discovered like who discoverd the equater. I also wonder whats going to hapen in school.
DeleteBy Keara
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