September 28, 2015

Picture of the Week: September 28, 2015

You have done a wonderful job with the other photos we have had this month.
I have seen you improve so much with them.
This week I want you to have some fun!

You are going to write a narrative.
A narrative is another name for a story.

So you will have the following in your comment.
characters
setting
problem
solution


STUDENTS: Let's begin by making this simple.
I want you to write the BEGINNING of a story.
Introduce me to the cat.
Introduce me to a problem the cat had that will lead it to taking a bath in the sink.
Remember the beginning of a story introduces you to the 
character, setting and the problem.

** Don't forget to put your name in the comment.

15 comments:

  1. Hi I am Max I like to tacke bathes my oner douse not like me tanking baths because I mack a mess.jacob miller

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    1. Jacob,
      I love how you introduced the character! I like the name Max! Can you tell me the events that led to the cat winding up in the sink? Another option is to elaborate on the problem that comes when Max takes a bath. Choose either one of these options and tell me more!

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    2. When I was a kitten I had my first bathe I loved it so every nite in the sink.jacob miller

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  2. Hi! My name is Sam.I like baths.Yesterday night I was in my bed.The next morning, my body felt yucky so i got in my bathtub(sink).I took a bath.I got my owner's back brush. I scrubed myself.La'Tariyahna

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  3. Once upon a time, a very naughty cat lived with its owner Mr. Bob. The cats name was Roger. One day, the cat was outside rolling in the mud and Mr. Bob came out the door and yelled Roger! Dean

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    1. Great beginning! I love it! I would want to read more about this!

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  4. The cat got in the sink becase he wants to be clean him self from being dirty from playing outside. It was muddy on the green grass so he started jumping on the mud puddle about ten times. Allreaty and jump in the sink and start the water. And start his bath and when he got out. He was clean super clean. Hayden.H.

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    1. Great beginning! You are doing such a great job! I am proud of how far you have come!

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  5. This is the character of the story it is soft it have babys kittens what do you think it is . It is a cat . The story takes place in a house but it goes outside. So the cat goes outside and goes into a big mud puddle i say get back in the house so next it takes off faster than me than i expected . Then i ran up and down the street to look for it which its name is mia then a while later i take a break .The end i went home the cat end up in in the sink scuribbung the mud of of her. dakedra

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    1. You are on a roll! Great beginning! Please remember to capitalize the letter I!!!!!

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  6. Meet Missy. She loves the water. That is why she sleeps by the bathroom door. She thinks she is the bathtub queen. Lilly Allen

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    1. Please tell me more! I love this! You are so talented as a writer!

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  7. Meet Kittens. She loves to take bathes. Kittens like to play.If she gets in the mud she will want to take a bath. Journee

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  8. Hi my name is jack i love baths one night i scracht my oner to stay in the bath by kyson

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